Great job Jacob, excellent narration. I know you said you felt all over the place, bu there was one phrase I latched onto that seemed to unite all of your sources. and sounds pretty argumentative. Here it is: "This strikes me as another situation in which the United States put their nose in another countries business only to create enemies and animosity in the world." You have specific audiences and real examples to make this argument, should you choose ( after some rephrasing of course). Excellent.